The field at Minnetrista were crowded with local people that comes from all over Muncie that awaits for the night fireworks, which is the main attraction of the celebration. Some were even not from Muncie, they were international students that came to study at Ball State University.
"The fireworks and the explosion just reminds us of what went through to gain freedom and personal freedom, if you remember that than you are less likely to lose it and continue to pay the price necessary to keep it." says George Doyle a local from Muncie.
Families can be seen to enjoying the moments, with young kids busy playing games whilst the adults enjoying the company of theirs spouse, friends and mutual friends. Blankets can be seen all over the field as the crowds lay down on earth and gaze into the beautiful skies.
When the fireworks happens, everyone were entertained completely and several cheerful noises can be heard from the crowds as new fireworks shoots into the dark sky.
People of Muncie that missed this celebration are encouraged to marked the dates of July 4, 2014 so they would be able to organize their schedules on that day and to enjoy the celebration moments with the rest on next year.
I like your quote in here, Zakwan! However, did you happen to interview more than one person? You typically want to have more than one source in the stories that you compose.
ReplyDeleteAnd you start well, but I think your lead could be even stronger if you clearly state the angle, or purpose, of the article, which appears to be what the Fourth of July means to people & how they celebrate it.
-Adam